Communication Expressway Ezine

Judy Vorfeld's Communication Expressway Issue 32

 July 2004 - Issue 32



  INTRO


* Need a few more tips on grammar and usage? I've begun taking my syndicated articles and duplicating them on my Editing and Writing Services site: http://www.EditingAndWritingServices.com/articles.html   This will be an ever-growing collection of tips. The size depends on my self discipline and my deadlines.

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  WHO'S THE KING? CONTENT OR COPY? By Judy Vorfeld


Confused about the differences between online content and online copy? Join the crowd. Merriam-Webster's* defines content as "the principal substance (as written matter, illustrations, or music) offered by a World Wide Web site." The Web Content Style Guide (McGovern, et al), says that content is knowledge that's been formally produced into media (text, graphics, video, animation, etc.). Some Web experts consider content and copy synonymous.

Regardless of the debate between content vs. copy, let's discuss why good copy is so vital to a website's success. Most people have websites to achieve the following:

  • Educate
  • Provide information
  • Sell products
  • Sell services

All-graphic sites often fall into the category of online brochures. And when a business says it wants nothing more than an online brochure, it probably means that the website is not--and is not expected to be--the primary source of income.

While it's possible for an all-graphic website to convey a product or service effectively, why are there so few-in terms of percentage-on the Web? Because of the need for search engines: those awesome software programs that bring us most of our visitors.

If you have an online business, and were given the choice between having a website with either graphics or copy, which would you choose? Most online business owners value search engines and visitors (VIZBOTS).** And most search engines have great regard for relevant copy, and no interest in graphics.

Text. Graphics. Audio. Video. All these features can offer relevance. But for a moment, try thinking of your website as a kingdom and your copy as king. A king reclines regally on his throne, surrounded by those who serve in various capacities. His ability to delegate wisely makes a profound difference in the outcome of the kingdom. Every person at every level has a job and understands the kingdom's hierarchy. Common threads. Common goals. Everyone wins.

Would His Royal Highness perch on the edge of the throne, timidly raise his hand and say, "'Scuse me, guys. May I speak?" Nope. Why should he? Further, should he roar to get attention? He simply must be where he belongs--surrounded by those props and people that make him look majestic-so he can command and control for the good of the kingdom.

If you have a website, why not treat your visitors as if they were royalty? Create peerless copy. And make sure the best copy is placed on your first page, first screen. Regardless of writing style, these words have a mission: they must let visitors know how the website can fill their needs or help meet their goals. And they must entice search engine robots.

Although it's important to have unusually good copy on the first page, it's also important to brighten every page with excellent copy for VIZBOTS. Good copy is a tapestry woven with the best of grammar, HTML, marketing, sales, research, search engine optimization, programming, and customer service.

Whether copy is king, content is king, or copy is content, copy deserves respect. Big time. Learn more about the importance of copy from experts like Mike Fortin, Gerry McGovern, Nick Usborne, Jill Whalen, and Marcia Yudkin. Then go back to your website, do an analysis, and-if necessary-get busy and create copy worthy of your VIZBOTS.

Resources:
Mike Fortin: http://www.successdoctor.com
Lorrie Morgan-Ferraro: http://www.red-hot-copy.com
Gerry McGovern: http://www.gerrymcgovern.com
Nick Usborne: http://www.nickusborne.com
Jill Whalen: http://www.highrankings.com/
Marcia Yudkin: http://www.yudkin.com/marketing.htm

* Merriam-Webster's Collegiate Dictionary, 11th edition (2003).
** VIZBOTS: site visitors and search engine robots

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  THE OFFICE CORNER


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2. THINKING OF STARTING YOUR OWN BUSINESS? Cameron Balloons Virtual Factory offers a powerful tool for understanding the components and how they work. Designed for undergraduate students new to business studies, this site offers an overview of the way a company is organized by function (production, design, marketing, accounts, and purchasing). Each function includes explanations, worksheets, theories, issues, etc.
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3. OfficEtiquette BY RUTHANN CLEMENS of The Rouse Company

Q. How long should I wait for return a phone call? What about emails?

A. Like Judy I have a home-based business, as well as a full-time position in the marking department of a Phoenix mall. A phone call or email always indicates a potential customer. I try to return a call as soon as I receive the information. If I know that I'll be unable to contact the person that day, I ask the receptionist to make contact and let the caller know when I'll be returning the call. Email is the same.

I've received comments upon returning a call like, "Thank you for returning my call so promptly." This is business: why wouldn't I call?

So, when is the best time? How about now?

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  GRAMMAR QUESTION OF THE MONTH - Different from or different than


Q. What's the best choice in a sentence: "different from" or "different than"?

A. Prentice Hall Reference Guide to Grammar and Usage, fifth edition, by Muriel Harris says that using "different from" is always correct, and the same is true of A Writer's Reference, Fourth Edition, Diana Hacker (Bedford/St. Martin's).

The reason you might sometimes use "different than" is to avoid awkward construction.

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  TECH TIPS BY TERENCE KIERANS - Publisher and Websites


PUBLISHER

Page layout programs are very much about formatting text into a legible and interesting configuration. Page layout professionals save time by using keyboard shortcuts for text manipulation:

Ctrl+bbold text
Ctrl+uunderline
Ctrl+iitalic
Ctrl+=superscript
Ctrl+Shift+= subscript
Ctrl+Shift+k small caps
Ctrl+Spacebarremoves all style formats from the highlighted text
Ctrl+Shift+faccesses the font menu, arrow keys select, and enter changes the selected text to that font
Ctrl+Shift+paccesses the font size menu, arrow keys select size, and enter enables the change
Ctrl+Shift+>increases the font size by a half point
Ctrl+Shift+<decreases the font size by a half point
Ctrl+mtoggles the background layer

WEBSITES

Protecting Your Email Address with an Anti-Spam Encoder: The NATATA Anti-Spam Encoder is a simple utility for turning mailto: links on HTML pages from addresses harvestable via spambot to mailto: links human-readable via web browser but not to simple spambot screen scrapers. Go to http://www.informit.com/articles/article.asp?p=174312 to read an informative article by A. Lizard.

Terence Kierans
Cyberspace Virtual Services
tkierans@virtualservices.com.au
http://www.virtualservices.com.au/
We keep your project on the boil, while you sleep

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  TECH CORNER


1. POPUP TEST: PopupTest.com provides a simple and independent source for popup window testing. Whether you are developing a popup killer software or you are thinking about purchasing one, you can use our sample popups to test the effectiveness of the application.
http://www.popuptest.com/

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  WRITING CORNER


1. WRITERS NET: Writing resources, news and discussion for authors /writers, editors, publishers, and agents.
http://www.writer.net

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  WORD OF THE MONTH: Basis*


Main Entry: ba·sis
Pronunciation: 'bA-s&s
Function: noun
Inflected Form(s): plural ba·ses /-"sEz/
Etymology: Latin -- more at BASE
1 : the bottom of something considered as its foundation
2 : the principal component of something
3 a : something on which something else is established or based b : an underlying condition or state of affairs <hired on a trial basis> <on a first-name basis>
4 : the basic principle
5 : a set of linearly independent vectors in a vector space such that any vector in the vector space can be expressed as a linear combination of them with appropriately chosen coefficients

Incidentally, Chicago Manual of Style, 15th edition, considers "basis" a much overworked word that "most properly means 'foundation'." It recommends that when possible, substitute adverbs (personally, not on a personal basis), or simply state the time (daily, not on a daily basis).

*By permission. From Merriam-Webster's Collegiate(R) Dictionary at www.m-w.com by Merriam-Webster, Incorporated.

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  RECOMMENDATIONS


1. ATLAS OF CANADA: Searchable collection of geographical, historical and topical maps.
http://atlas.gc.ca/site/english/index.html

2. OLD SUPERSTITIONS: Large collection of superstitions, indexed.
http://www.oldsuperstitions.com/

3. DOING BUSINESS ON THE INTERNET: Series of articles from Janet Attard's powerful Business Know How site.
http://www.businessknowhow.com/internetindex.htm

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  JUDY'S CORNER


I recently received the following email: "I would hardly consider your service to be expert in editing if you're not keeping up with basic elements of style. Web site is two words, uppercased "W." I think you owe it to your clients to stay current."

The writer is correct. I owe it to my clients to stay current. Those of us offering services all do. Unfortunately, with the changes taking place because of the Internet, we find that there are some styles that are not cast in concrete.

When there are several interpretations of words and capitalization, why not choose the most comfortable one. I'm always looking for ways to use fewer keystrokes, so I choose Gerry McGovern's "website." His style guide (The Web Content Style Guide) is one of my favorites. If I were a betting person, I'd say that in a few years, "website" will be a standard. But that's not the point. The point is: stay current and be flexible.

And now I'm off to edit some more photos. I may soon add photography and editing photographs to my list of services. All in good time.

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