Writing Category

How to write bright headings and headlines

Tuesday, February 21st, 2012

By Judy Vorfeld
Want to know how to write engaging headlines? Much depends on the audience. If you’re writing headlines or headings for a business, you’ll probably avoid being cutesy. But cutesy might work well for headings in an informal ezine or newsletter.
In any event, aim for bright, attention-grabbing headings. Think “action verbs.” Take [...]

Capitalizing north, east, south, and west

Thursday, February 9th, 2012

By Judy Vorfeld
Have you ever wondered when it’s okay to capitalize north, east, south, and west?
Most style guides say that compass points and the terms derived from them are lowercased if they just mean direction or location.
But you capitalize them when they’re specific regions or an integral part of a proper name.
For example, [...]

Ms, Miss, Mrs, or ? How do I address a biz letter to a woman?

Tuesday, November 1st, 2011

When writing a letter, what form do I use to address a woman? When writing to a married woman, follow her preference for first and last names if you know it. She may prefer to be addressed by her original name (Ms. Joan L. Conroy). If you do know that she is using her husband’s [...]

When do you use an extra apostrophe “s” following a last name ending with the letter “s”?

Saturday, October 29th, 2011

When do you use an extra apostrophe “s” following a last name ending with the letter “s”?
Chicago Manual of Style, 14th Edition, 6.24-30 says:
The general rule for the possessive of nouns covers most proper nouns, including most names ending in sibilants (but see exceptions in 6.26-27 and alternatives in 6.30). Kansas’s; Burns’s poems; Marx’s theories; [...]

Columbus Day at the Zoo

Thursday, October 13th, 2011

Monday morning, my brother, David Crook, friend Martha Retallick, and I, went to the Phoenix Zoo. We had a wonderful time.
Retallick recently published a book, Bike-tography. “When I was in my early twenties,” she says, “I set the goal of bicycling through all 50 of the United States. I accomplished this over a twelve-year period, [...]

How to use a colon in writing

Tuesday, September 27th, 2011

Have you ever been confused about when to use a colon as opposed to, say, a dash?
When using a colon, think of “as follows.”
A colon can introduce a series of elements or amplify what came before the colon.
Note regarding “as follows”: this applies to run-in lists. If you’re creating a vertical list (maybe [...]

Business protocol for folding letters

Saturday, July 23rd, 2011

Did you know there’s a business protocol for folding letters? Someone contacted me recently and wanted to know the right way for a letter-size piece of paper to be folded. Here’s what I found out:
For 8 1/2 x 11 paper that is going in a #10 envelope, or other stationery with a No. 9 or [...]

ACDL offers staff/boards Plain Language Seminar

Friday, July 22nd, 2011

This week I took a course in Plain Language at the Disability Empowerment Center in Phoenix, and learned about the Plain Writing Act of 2010. Plain English/Language/Writing isn’t about “dumbing down,” but rather about clear communication. Among others, those of us who write website content and direct mail copy understand writing to a specific [...]

The power of words

Wednesday, April 13th, 2011

How to punctuate et al

Tuesday, February 22nd, 2011

Is it: et al? et. al? et al.? or et. al.?

Why do people use the phrase et al.? And incidentally, what I just wrote is the right way to punctuate it. A period after the letter “l.”
Merriam Webster’s says the phrase is an abbreviation for “and others.” Same for The Chicago Manual of Style and [...]